Fantastic Voyage OGR

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  1. OGR 03/03/2016

    Hi Hannah,

    My first response to your OGR is this: DO SOME BLOODY WORK!!! This is actually a con - you've done some picture research (easy and quick), you've produced some really quick Photoshop thumbnails (easy and quick) and you've produced some tiny thumbnails of some mash-potatoey blobs with evil faces... There's no sense here of what you're actually going to do in terms of breaking HIV down into a narrative structure. This isn't good enough and in light of your last project (in which you designed nothing at all and took seven weeks to do it), I think you need to take a long hard look at what you're actually doing with your time and get on with something decent and born of actual hard work and sustained commitment, otherwise this project - and your classmates - are going to leave you completely behind. Sorry to play hardball, but enough is enough Hannah - get on with the work, stop fiddling about at the edges. I want to see another OGR from you before next week in which you actually commit to some design work and an actual concept. Sort it out.

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